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17 March 2008 @ 03:46 pm
Juliet/Claire: Angels with silver wings  
I'm using this for my Juliet table because I'm a dirty cheater.

[info]toestastegood asked for Claire/Juliet, "fear is the absence of hope".

Angels with silver wings
[info]philosophy_20's #5, syzygy. Claire/Juliet. PG-13. 500 words

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Angels with silver wings


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Fragile and precious things need special handling.

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After days -and nights, long lonely nights- Claire is the first one to approach Juliet. The beach lingers beneath the waves, abandoned and forgotten. She tells her she can't stay there, under the sun and the storm forever; she tells her she is going to catch her death. Juliet tilts her head, maybe; but she is not doing it on purpose.

Claire asks her to go with her and it is so unfair, Juliet thinks, that it is Claire the one to come for her. She is so much emptier, so much more broken. It feels wrong leaning her sore lifeless body against Claire's fragile figure. They've never talked before, but they walk together through the jungle.

Claire was fine and her baby was fine and her serum worked, because Juliet is a brilliant woman and she has a gift, you know. But it was all for nothing. For nothing.

It is this place. These people, they should have never landed here, only to get entangled in her tragedy.

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We always try to share the tenderest of care.

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Juliet is almost amused to find out Claire's house is actually her house, flowered drapes and all. How very fitting. Claire offers a bedroom and warns her about the bathroom sink. "It leaks from time to time," she says.

Juliet nods and doesn't tell her that she already knows.

She hates this house, it will never be more than her prison cell, but she keeps quiet and moves to the smaller bedroom, to a bed that's never been slept in before. Claire has dark circles under her eyes and Juliet knows, sleepless nights are noticeably more bearable with someone else there to hold your hand and fight away the nightmares.

Maybe that is why they quickly go from sharing one house to sharing one bed.

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Things get damaged. Things get broken.

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It starts when Juliet finds out Claire is afraid of storms. She presses Claire's body to hers under the blankets and soon, Claire realizes Juliet is afraid too. Juliet is afraid of this place. Of forever in this place, she will confess weeks later.

Their limbs entwine in their sleep and one night, one particularly cold night, Juliet peels off Claire's oversized t-shirt and Claire gets her hand under Juliet's pajama pants.

The rain drums on the roof and Juliet's hands increase their pressure. Claire's hands go limp against her skin. The clacking of the rain muffles their suffocated moans, the squashy sound of flesh meeting flesh, the thumping of their broken hearts.

Afterwards, they could ask themselves why -shared loneliness, forever in this place. But no, they only lie exhausted and scared, clinging to each other, their breathing coming in and out in short painful gasps.

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I wish I could take the pain for you
{Depeche Mode -Precious}

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Natasha: sharp dresser[info]thecorporeal on March 17th, 2008 03:13 pm (UTC)
Ahhhhh. Is Claire/Juliet the new OTP? ;D

This was beautiful! I love how you take the visual of the environment around to enhance the feel of the situation, such as the rain, which was just perfect. I like the quietness of Juliet and Claire - it was the whole 'quiet before the storm' kind of thing. It's very intriguing to me, and I think you have an amazing characterization of them both. You and your angst! Haha. Everyone is doomed, are they not? :( But yes, thought this was beautiful and love the pairing! <3
lenina20: Juliet[info]lenina20 on March 17th, 2008 03:20 pm (UTC)
It is definitely the new OTP. I've written four fics of them in two weeks or so ;) Yeah, me and my agnst indeed ;)

Thank yous so so much! It means a lot that you liked it. I love working with them so really, thanks a lot for such kind words! ;)
Mary: Claire - Dear Diary[info]bebitched on March 17th, 2008 07:28 pm (UTC)
I love this so so much. There's so much that goes unspoken between them, so much beautiful imagery and sheer emotion. Great job!
lenina20: sawyer claire[info]lenina20 on March 17th, 2008 08:35 pm (UTC)
Wow. Thank you so much! That is more than I deserve! Thanks!
Stephanie (Amber): Juliet[info]slybrunette on March 17th, 2008 08:51 pm (UTC)
I love how you can take a ship I never really spent much time thinking about and write it so beautifully not once or twice, but four times.

Fabulous!
lenina20: Juliet[info]lenina20 on March 17th, 2008 08:53 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! It actually gets easier the more you write them and if I do is partly thanks to you, so thank you so much for that too! ♥
aboutbunnies: claire[info]aboutbunnies on March 18th, 2008 02:05 am (UTC)
Damn, when you say you're writing fic, you're writing lots of fic! Not that I'm complaining.

This is so lovely. How things happen almost in a seamless continuum, without these two trying or even realizing it's happening.
lenina20: sawyer claire[info]lenina20 on March 18th, 2008 09:31 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, honey! I'm trying to get out all the things I have to concentrate on your AU, which has me a little scared. But so excited! And thanks for the comment, it always means a lot coming from you, for one of my Juliet fics, so thanks, dear. I'm glad you liked what I did with the prompt!
S A R A H: lost07[info]theagonyofblank on March 18th, 2008 05:08 am (UTC)
Dude, dude. I so love this pairing now.
Such a wonderful fic, and I love how they don't need words to convey their thoughts. And actions. XD. Very nice.
lenina20: Juliet[info]lenina20 on March 18th, 2008 09:32 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I definitely ♥ this pairing. I'm so glad the feeling got to you, too! :D:D
sanity is not statistical: lost juliet[info]janie_tangerine on March 18th, 2008 07:21 am (UTC)
Aaaawww that really was nice! It really flew well and they're both very IC, I love it.
lenina20: Juliet[info]lenina20 on March 18th, 2008 09:33 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm very happy you liked it, dear and that you thought it was IC! ♥
iwouldbegood: Lost Juliet beach[info]iwouldbegood on March 18th, 2008 12:04 pm (UTC)
You make me read so many pairings I normally wouldn't! But that's a good thing, cause just as I believe that writing characters which may not necessarily be your fave improvs your writing skills, I also believe it's good for the readers to wander out of their comfort zone...

I love the opening lines:
The beach lingers beneath the waves, abandoned and forgotten. She tells her she can't stay there, under the sun and the storm forever; she tells her she is going to catch her death.
I'm always very fond of fics where occasionally there's a line or two about the surrounding where the fic takes place, because it adds special beauty to the narrative, and because it can be a nice way to explore the emotional state of the characters through the nature that surrounds them.

The whole feel of the fic is very specific, and even though I can't say I'm particularly interested or familiar with Claire and her thoughts and emotions, it does feel right for the both of them. Compared to your Kate/Juliet fic for example, it has a completely different tone, so that means you did your job well. It's Juliet's POV so it's more approachable for me, but your Claire is very empathetic as well. With snippets like "the thumping of their broken hearts" or "short painful gasps", well I think it makes the fic equally enjoyable for both Juliet and Claire fans, because you have to feel for both women.

What I also liked is that the physical part is there, but just hinted at. I don't have anything against more graphic fics, also when it's femme slash, but sometimes exactly the lack of details conveys so much more. What you did describe was tasteful, meaningful and beautiful.

And at the end my fave part:
She presses Claire's body to hers under the blankets and soon, Claire realizes Juliet is afraid too. Juliet is afraid of this place. Of forever in this place, she will confess weeks later.
The atmosphere of those lines is beautiful! Gosh, I love the desperation that echoes between the lines. And even though the end doesn't exactly offer comfort, it's as close as they can get to it at that point...
lenina20: Juliet[info]lenina20 on March 18th, 2008 02:07 pm (UTC)
I insist. I don't deserve this. Your comment are always so good. This is way better than my fic, really. You have no idea how much it means for me to read this. I especially liked what you said about the difference with Kate and Juliet because yes, I do think that J/J would really find a comfort in both their losses that is impossible for Jul/Kate because there is an undeniable tension there, jealousy and animosity that runs very deep. So really, thank you so much. I'm also happy you thought it was tasteful because well, I don't write graphic so... ;) Thank you honey. You really are more than i deserve.