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12 May 2008 @ 10:33 pm
Two drabbles: Sawyer/Juliet & Sawyer/Kate  
It's been a while since the last time I wrote a 100-word drabble, so here there're two, to compensate ;)

For my Sawyer table.

Title: Open wound
Pairing: Sawyer/Juliet
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 100
Note: for [info]30_wounds's #01, it's just a flesh wound.
Disclaimer: Lost is not mine.


Open Wound


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He is injured and she has bottle of peroxide – it's the first night but this would have happened even if they hadn't left, such is the depth of their betrayal.

He bites her lip. The open bottle of peroxide tilts and falls.

Red blood spills out of his wounded hand - staining her white cheek in red; then her neck, her breasts, her stomach, her thighs. She whimpers and he thrusts harder, needing her to cry out louder, dig her nails deeper, burn and sting and leave her scar on his skin, like the open wound that cuts his palm.


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For my Kate/Sawyer Table.

Title: Absence
Pairing: Sawyer/Kate
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 100
Note: for [info]un_love_you's #04, I need to want you.
Disclaimer: Lost is not mine.


Absence


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It’s been three years and she still feels his presence, tangible and real. He breathes in her neck and grabs her hips and spins her around—she is still kissing him when he perches her on the kitchen counter.

She wraps her legs around him and a nearby glass falls and shatters. He laughs huskily, his stubble scratching her cheek as he thrusts into her, pushing her forcefully against the cabinet. She burns and sweats and cries out, when he fades away—right from underneath her fingertips.

She lies alone in bed, her knees bent up to her chest, shivering.
 
 
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Deb: Kate/Sawyer: Hold On To Me Forever[info]candylandgal on May 12th, 2008 09:04 pm (UTC)
Oh, Absence----this one is especially perfect, probably because I am needing to know that the fictional character misses them as much as I do right now. I hope that doesn't sound as strange as I think it does. ;)

Your drabbles are incredible. As much as I crave long stories that feel like they are never going to end, at the same time, I don't think that there is anything more powerful than a drabble sometimes. I am in awe of anyone who can pack that much power and intensity into so few words.

Incredible pieces!
lenina20: kate sawyer 3[info]lenina20 on May 12th, 2008 09:16 pm (UTC)
Thank you so so much for such an awesome comment! With more words than the fic! :D:D:D:D I'm very happy you liked these - I love drabbles too and I write them quite often. I guess I'm lazy - they take a long while to write, but very few words which is great for a not-native ;) Thanks again! Your comment made me happy. And God, I miss them too! ;)
Deb: Kate/Sawyer: Tangled Up In You[info]candylandgal on May 12th, 2008 09:19 pm (UTC)
I think that the 'not native' factor makes the way you write that much more incredible and worthy of huge accolades. You really take the language and raise it to poetry, or its very best form, when you write.

*sniffles* Your icon completely tugs at the heart, too! ;)
lenina20: kate sawyer 4[info]lenina20 on May 12th, 2008 09:22 pm (UTC)
*blushes*

You really are too kind. Thank you so much. Those words mean more than you can imagine! :D
jenthegypsy: LOST - SAWYER - I DO[info]jenthegypsy on May 12th, 2008 09:11 pm (UTC)
I say Oh hell, yes! to both images - to Sawyer and Juliet getting on with it after being abandoned on the island and to Kate still feeling his presence so long after she's made her choice.

Nicely done!
lenina20: suliet[info]lenina20 on May 12th, 2008 09:18 pm (UTC)
*blushes* Thank you so much. I guess these two kind of o well together, but poor Kate, really ;) It's great hearing you liked them. Thank you so so much for reading and for the kind words! :D
satin in a coffin: Sawyer & Juliet[info]navras_rheya on May 12th, 2008 09:15 pm (UTC)
oh my gah! sawyer/juliet killed me. perfect!
lenina20: suliet[info]lenina20 on May 12th, 2008 09:19 pm (UTC)
Well -- I have this thing with Sawyer/Juliet. You know it already ;) I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading! :D
sanity is not statistical: lost sawyer gun[info]janie_tangerine on May 12th, 2008 09:16 pm (UTC)
These are way awesome! I have to say I slightly favor #1, it's just so descriptive with so few words. But the second is great, too. I almost feel sorry for Kate there... almost ;) great job on both!
lenina20: suliet[info]lenina20 on May 12th, 2008 09:21 pm (UTC)
Almost? Almost? Imagine being deprived of Sawyer. You almost feel sorry for her? Poor, poor Kate ;)

Thank you so much dear. I'm very, very happy you liked these. Your commetns always made me happy!
Stephanie (Amber): Just Get Me Closer To You (Lost)[info]slybrunette on May 12th, 2008 09:21 pm (UTC)
Hello to the imagery, on both counts really, but that scarlet stain from his wound against her skin paints an especially interesting picture.

I also like how dirty and yet twisty the Sawyer/Kate on is. Great job on both of them!
lenina20: kate sawyer 3[info]lenina20 on May 12th, 2008 09:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I have to confess here that it took me a while to read your comment because I was looking at the icon - :O You are so great, hun. Thanks a lot. I'm so very happy you liked these - and that you thought the last one was dirty and twisty. Every time I feel like writing K/S sex I end up without a plot that justifies it so I have to use this kind of thing. It means a lot coming from you - thank you so, so much! :D:D:D
Stephanie (Amber): Just Get Me Closer To You (Lost)[info]slybrunette on May 12th, 2008 09:29 pm (UTC)
Okay, even I like that icon, and I wasn't crazy about the scene, so yeah, I can understand.

I have that problem (sex without plot) all the time. Which is why I barely write anything porny. But I think what you did here is far more interesting than just smut.
lenina20: sawyer claire[info]lenina20 on May 12th, 2008 09:34 pm (UTC)
Thanks a for saying that - I like the concept of what I did there. The fact that these two about sex really had to do with me spending the afternoon reading about Henry VIII and that making me remember The Tudors. *blushes* I'm weird like that. Even though well - the idea of writing original K/S, that is not based in canon, is always around my head. I don't have a problem writing Sawyer/anyone else sex!

Anyway, sorry for the ramble. *blushes*
Stephanie (Amber): I Want To Save You (Lost)[info]slybrunette on May 12th, 2008 09:35 pm (UTC)
I like the ramble dear, I think I've told you that. An inside glance into the mind of the master and such ;)
elliotsmelliot: sawyer[info]elliotsmelliot on May 13th, 2008 12:39 am (UTC)
Oh, I'm in love with the first one and the idea that it would have happened anyway, such is the depth of their betrayal. The imagery is great.

Despite being more grounded, the second one comes across more abstract. Originally I read it that Kate was with Jack but then thinking of Sawyer but it could also just be read as a fantasy or a dream.

They are particularly effective to be read side by side.
lenina20: suliet[info]lenina20 on May 13th, 2008 11:47 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! :D:D I do think they kind of go together somehow, especially with your reading on the last one. I wrote it as a fantasy but of course the other reading is possible too! Your comments always add so much to my fics. Thank you, so so much! :D:D I'm happy you enjoyed them! And I hope I haven't convinced you yet of Sawyer/Juliet! :D
halfdutch: Sawyer by xconic[info]halfdutch on May 13th, 2008 12:52 am (UTC)
Oh, I really liked both of these, so very evocative and so full of hurt, both of them.
lenina20: sawyer 2[info]lenina20 on May 13th, 2008 11:48 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm very happy you enjoyed them! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing! :D
MissJones[info]missj0nes on May 13th, 2008 02:30 pm (UTC)
Two at the same time *wooh!*
I'm really beginning to warm up to the idea of Sawyer/Juliet after The Oceanic Six have left the island. I blame you for corrupting my Skater mind :P
lenina20: kate sawyer 3[info]lenina20 on May 13th, 2008 07:47 pm (UTC)
No, no, no. Please. Don't blame me! Don't warm up! I wrote the second drabble two! Don't they deserve to be together at the end? Miss each other all the way through it? *cries*

;)

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, as always! I'm hoping you enjoyed them!
MissJones: Sawyer[info]missj0nes on May 14th, 2008 03:05 pm (UTC)
Oh, Skate is DEFINITELY the only TRUE ship - but in the waiting time I can go with Sawyer/Juliet. Maybe not really in the series but in fanfics I can bear it ^^

I certainly enjoyed them :D
lenina20: kate sawyer 2[info]lenina20 on May 14th, 2008 03:25 pm (UTC)
It sounds so ominous -"the waiting time."

I'm in denial, where it's warm and sunny.
MissJones[info]missj0nes on May 14th, 2008 04:06 pm (UTC)
Lol, it is ;)
I wish I could be in your place of denial - mine was shaggy and falling apart from the minute I knew Kate was one of the Oceanic Six and Sawyer wasn't.
aboutbunnies: k/s eggtown[info]aboutbunnies on May 16th, 2008 06:40 am (UTC)
Oh, I love these, and I love that you've posted them together. The first is just stunning in its imagery (even though it makes me angry at both Sawyer and Kate) and the second is just heartbreaking.
lenina20: kate sawyer[info]lenina20 on May 16th, 2008 07:19 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm very happy you liked them. I kind of like the way they work together. Don't get angry at the poor guys - this is harder for them that it is for us. As always, it feels amazing knowing you like them, dear! :D:D:D Thanks!
Sister Mira Misery: Alppu parta-kitara nam.[info]silvestra on May 23rd, 2008 07:05 pm (UTC)
Absence - new definition of Teh Awesum Hawt! I love it. For some reason Juliet/Sawyer doesn't really do it for me, but Skate? YES PLZ!

*Memories.*
lenina20: kate sawyer 4[info]lenina20 on May 23rd, 2008 10:58 pm (UTC)
Woah - thank you so much. If you're looking for K/S, well, this is your journal ;) Thanks for reading and commenting! :D